Tuesday, July 10, 2012

then you smiled...

The day was bad
The day was long
I was left feeling
Like I didn't belong
I felt like a beetle
By a shoe defiled
All crushed to a pulp
But then you smiled...

I was dropping bombs
I was oozing hate
I was burning people
With acrid distaste
I was losing my mind
I was getting all riled
Snapping at shadows
But then you smiled...

The world was harsh
The world was tough
I wanted to give up
I had had quite enough
I was about to lash out
I was about to go wild
And smash it all to pieces
But, just then, you smiled...

There was no end in sight
I was fresh out of hope
I was jerking on the end
Of a really long rope
At the end of my tether
I would not be beguiled
When you were walking by me
But then, you stopped, and smiled...

4 comments:

Sandy said...

Hugs! ...and the man smiles again!!!! :)

Madhu said...

Love the first 2 stanzas :) You have captured accurately very familiar feelings.

Madhu said...

You seem to have smashed that writers block!!!

KBDGR8EST said...

Undeniably a very strong poem... kudos